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SirKevinSirKevin9 months ago

Well done! I liked that the protagonist didn't know the plan beforehand, and the dialogue was really good.

There were a few typos, so PM me if you want a proofreader/editor for future chapters.

Great quick story, thanks for sharing!

likestolicklikestolick4 months ago

Chapter 3 anytime soon?

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