All Comments on 'Bucket List of Sex Ch. 01'

You're obviously clueless about what a sentence is. Learn that.

Regardless of the way this feedback is given, Thanks. It’s my first time creating such content, so please be patient with my writing style as I develop.

Bad English is not a writing style. If you don't know how to use the language, then don't. It's not rocket science.

Obviously you conflate 'constructive' with positive.

"Constructive criticism is a type of feedback that provides specific, actionable suggestions for improvement" (Indeed.com)

My feedback, by definition, was constructive. Your choice to consider it otherwise is just that, your choice. You apparently aren't as fond of constructive criticism as you pretend to think you are.

If you only want feedback that contains praise and compliments, stop being bad at what you want feedback on. That's pretty simple to say, but basically impossible for people like you to accomplish.

She's going to fall in love with him, I just know it.