All Comments on 'Bully’s Baby Boy'

Interesting premise, but not that realistic. The biggest problem is the typos. They interrupt the flow and take the reader out of the story. Please do some better proof reading or get someone to act as an editor.

I like Dash stories. Ideas come up, decisions are made and you don't have to wade through thousands of useless sidebar thoughts. Proofing really needs work.

Poor Claire, its not easy to live with that pain in her heart.

She and Paul are back together.

It would be nice to see instead of a nerdy, weak guy but a muscular guy instead for the next story

It's honestly stunning how badly written this is. I couldn't get past the first few paragraphs. The hottest contents in the world couldn't justify this package. Rushed and unbelievable! People do not talk like this!!!