All Comments on 'Bunkmates'

A cute little short story. Sweet and to the point. I liked the style. A few punctuation errors, but nothing so egregious as to ruin the story. A good first entry.

Clever, try some more.

clever . brief and original... another?

I love your story, I have masturbated and heard others masturbating many times in hostel dorm rooms. It is one of my favourite things to think about to make myself cum.