All Comments on 'Bus to Boston'

All in all the premise is good. A little more development of the plot combined with some editing would make this a good stroke story.

I noticed you mentioned feet in your fetishes, are you into being a foot slave or having your feet used sexually? Feel free to email me the

wildwillum@gmail.com

It was very short. I liked but it could have been better if you added more description of his movements and your feelings

Great start. More description would take it further. Awesome story, though. Keep writing.

Very sexy!

Tess (uk)

I definitely pictured myself

Thanks! I enjoy your writing.