by marycontrary1162
Fantastic! What a fun tale! I will definitely be reading more of your stories!
Wonderful story and extremely visual and erotic! Please continue writing as your stories are so varied, visual and deeply erotic
... so well written, exciting, touching, heart-warming ... I do love your stories *****
Upfront, I'm just a guy. I really enjoyed your work and wish someday I could produce something as nice. I know what it is like to make love with a woman, and I hope that your depiction of women making love together is accurate because everyone needs love like that. When women write sex scenes, they are much more fulfilling than some guy saying, "I slammed my 18-inch cock into her virgin pussy, and she immediately came so hard that she passed out. SInce she was passed out, after I pumped my quart of cum into her pussy, I flipped her over and filled her whore ass with my massive manhood." You can tell that your prose is far superior to what most guys think erotica is supposed to be like. I'm going to treat myself to a few more of your works and may comment of them. If you get tired of my comments, just tell me to go away. Thanks again for sharing.
Thanks Mary for another lovely story, very nice to read, and what not...
Till next time i need to read Your work. Bye for now, Love, sue!
Another good story!
A little bit quick at the start but still really good!
Thank you