All Comments on 'Business Liaisons Ch. 04'

I thinks its great 'LIKE A QUICKIE' or a good warm up for a workout " Patients people its a sign of good things to come"

In the words of Chandler Bing, ". . . Can you WRITE any slower?" You are, for whatever reason, calling a couple of paragraphs a "chapter".I'll wait for the proverbial movie!!!!

Slow and tantalizing is the pace of the novella. Just enough description to make it interesting and erotic.

Would like Cyndi to consider tying a couple of "her chapters" into a single chapter so we don't get tantalized and teased too much.

Hooked on the "Business".