All Comments on 'Business Trip Sex: The College Jock'

Was there a point to this? Anybody?

And just never get married and post in EC not LW

Nice quick fantasy piece. Your world and his world accidentally collided, you found a really interesting cock, and the explored the possibilities when lust took over.

As an excuse unplanned affair, it can stand alone. What I would like to learn, however, is more about your huge cock experiences, fantasies, and findings, from a female perspective. We really need you to tell us more. Being so tiny, especially, aren't they all huge?

No mention of hubby or why she was cheating. Don't know who this person is.

Didn't like it.

What can I say only pointless just a story about how to get caught and how to get tons of std waste of time even reading this why don’t you put a big sign on her saying I’ve just cheated and probably caught a load of std what a waste can’t even give you any stars

No this seems to be school safe story, no pointy things like plot, Climax, or Resolution. Plus as an extra bonus it seems to written by a 6th grader.

I liked the writing. The category is all wrong. There’s no mention that the main character is married, so how is this a loving wife? Erotic Couplings is more suitable, especially because it’s not really a story. It’s just a description of a hookup. There’s nothing descriptive about either character to make the reader feel anything about them. I hope you keep writing, but pick the right category. Loving Wives, Mature, Romance, and most others need a better developed story line and character relatability.

Is she married? Is ANYONE really THAT stupid?

1 star

Not good. Really bad. No loving wife, no fiance, no girlfriend, just a random whore.No story.

I like the fact that she doesn’t take 3 pages to get to the point of the story - sex! With a few positive suggestions she would really elevate her erotic writings - sure I’m willing to help her. I suspect Horny is part of who she is, that’s nice & a good starting point. Keep writing - wish I was who you selected in the bar. Ignore the rude comments, like assholes everyone has an opinion. In your next adventure take it slower in the upfront seduction...bring the reader along in your seduction, make them feel you in the pond of your hands. Be more descriptive - based on your physical attraction, tease the reader into total ecstasy- I believe you can do it

So presumably she had a set of scales and a tape measure with her in the club to be able to give us his height and weight so accurately

Wrong category

If so, do you worry about bringing STD's home at all?