All Comments on 'Busted Ch. 01'

Excellent start! I'm intrigued by your characters and turned on by the sex. More! More!

I like the way the build up is kept reasonable, moves into sex and continues the build up at the same time. Good style. Almost got there on chapter one, flipped to page two and it was shot. Now to see if I make over the top on chapter 2.

Reminds me of being back in college. I have done both but 3 ways with another girl is much better than 2 guys. Then again, I prefer women.