All Comments on 'Buttercup 02: Changes'

Great series, I can see your creations come to life in my minds eyes as your words flow off the page. You’re one hell of a writer. Looking forward to more.

I appreciate this is getting outside of your usual swimming lane, but you have done a great job so far with this storyline.

I will be anxiously awaiting further installments, hoping none of them are in the LW category.

Great job, ST! Loved this!

Excellent series. Good spin on the cousin relationship. Interesting to see where you bring this relationship

I can deal with cousins without getting grossed out...

Love the tale so far, please, please, please don't make one of the future installments land in LW for the usual reasons. They don't seem at all the type of people to hurt each other by cheating.

Loved the change of pace. 5*

GREAT story, as usual! Only one Buzz Kill: Sheila Jackson. That name evokes.... well, you know. Thanks for not including crown weaves and camera-chasing in her character. LULZ

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If that's the worst criticism, then you should be winning awards left and write [sic]!

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As always 5/5!!!!

That was different!

5 asteros ombre.

Great addition to the series, looking forward to more chapters to see the ups and downs this young couple face. Thanks ST

Scores 5/5

ST - Don't even think about transitioning to LW! I agree with Angst, you did a magnificent job creating characters certain to last the test of time in a marriage. Don't fuck it up! LOL

PS - 5*

Like this storyline a lot and the characters you have created. Just a little leary about the comment, "Future installments of this series may appear in different areas of Literotica..." Please skip the LW genera this time. Let's see how far you can take this Romance.

I too am feeling a bit uneasy after reading saddletramp's announcement, that further installments may appear in different categories. I hope our much appreciated author talks romance, not LW ...

I just love the story. what a wonderful relationship

I agree with the other comments, please stay away from the LW lane this time.

these two are to special to tear apart. please make it them against the world, not against each other. thank you.

I TOO AGREE WITH MOST OF THE OTHER COMMENTS. THOUGHT MANY STATES ALLOW COUSINS TO MARRY, MANY DON'T. MANY CITIZENS ARE NOT AWARE OF THE LEGALITIES OF THIS KIND OF MARRAGE, THOUGHT AT ONE TIME IT WAS A VERY COMMON PRACTICE. IN THE MOVIE, "GONE WITH THE WIND", ASHLEY MARRIED HIS COUSIN MELONIE AND THERE WAS NOT A PEEP FROM THE CRITICS AND SENSORSHIP PEOPLE OF THE LATE 1930'S. WHAT DID RAISE A FUSS WAS THE LINE THAT BRIT SAID TO WIFE SCARLET: "FRANKLY MY DEAR, I DON'T GIVE A DAMN!". THIS WAS THE FIRST MOVIE TO USE PROFANITY IN IT. SO YES I AGREE, LETS MAKE THIS A STORY OF THEM AGAINST THE OTHERS WHO SEE THIS AS AN INCEST ISSUE. BY THE WAY, HERE IN NEW YORK IT IS LEGAL TO MARRY YOUR 1st COUSIN.

@MarkT63

I can deal with cousins without getting grossed out...

I'm sure that is a relief for us all.

These two are a breath of fresh air please keep them togather the world needs them after all the bull shit thats going on.

Looking forward to the next chapter for these two characters

The series is excellent, and author has done a magnificent job with the storyline and writing. Well done 5/5

Don't forget to get her pregnant so they can care for the three-eared mutant offspring.

Great job, Author!

I never got along with most of my cousins, male or female...

Only comment I have is that his dad should have given him ‘the talk’ about 5 years earlier. Thirteen isn’t too early. By the time he’s 18, he’s probably already diddled in sex.

Only bad thing for me here is he didn't ask her dad for permission to marry her