All Comments on 'By the Pale Moonlight Ch. 04'

More please.

Oh my, could it be? Her father???!!?! Fantastic.. Love it.

i cannot wait to read more

~ Masterskitten26

why would john be her father if james hassaidshe shares gideons blood? I think the tat was part of a premonition she had.

Story is awesome. Is John really Gideon? I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope you make the chapters longer.

What if, Tara isn't his daughter but a niece or cousin? Maybe and came into the power, only, because all thought Gideon (John?) was/is dead. Please continue, its a great story so far. And James needs her...

If you don´t give your heroine a bit more of a brain, your short will be quite short. As a reader I get very frustrated how anyone can be so stupid (Tara).

Don't let the haters discourage you, your story is fresh and i love your characters..Jerin can suck it if he doesnt like the story he doesnt need to read it..

I want you to post the next chapter fast because its becoming very exciting I liked it

keep it up!

She's stupid and dirty, what is she trying to do grow a nest in her hair? What a waste of Alpha blood

It is a okay story, but why so stupid.