All Comments on 'Cabin Camping Ch. 02'

It would have been better if you didn't keep confusing the names between Olivia and Sophie. Made it much less readable.

A fun tale, but one page installments are annoying to many of us with advanced reading skills. Try to develop more plot into each chapter.

Edit it a bit better. He fucked Sophia?

It's an ok story but the name switches make it a real mess. You seriously need a proofreader.

Make sure the next story gets edited better, especially keep the names straight.

Story itself is pretty good, with lots of potential, good enough to deserve better editing

Good story with a fun plot. Can’t wait for the third part

REALLY enjoyed this!! Cannot wait to read more!! Are you almost done with part 3?!