by Menoetes
don't you hate it when that happens?
You're minding your own business when your wife turns into a (bigger) goddess and the laws of physics become mere suggestions.
Well done.
A truly enjoyable read, just what I needed at the present time. A quick and to the point without explanation read. I especially loved the descriptiveness of the rampant sex. I usually prefer a long build up that tingles the erotic nerves, that builds characters and occasionally communicates the woman as the stronger partner who takes command over her husband for her own ends.
Lol, for sure the law of conservation of mass is the first thing out the window in a lot of my writing. Closely followed by the male refractory period. It's a lot of fun... XD
This is an absolutely ridiculous, over-the-top male fantasy. I loved every word of it.
I am such a pessimist I couldn't enjoy the story . I scanned all three pages looking for where the other shoe would drop and the MC's life flipped from fantasy to nightmare. I'm gonna read it again, secure in the knowledge that there isn't a spiked pit waiting for hubby to get pushed into by his amazingly, yet out-of-character, hot wife.
4 stars just from all the dirty talk I caught the wife spewing in my hasty scanning.
Nicely done story with an interesting plot, great dialogue. and a super sex scene.
That was mind blowing! Like a triple X twilight zone, lol
Very well written and just pulled me along with the need to see where it was going.
Definitely different from anything else I've read here at Literotica.com, and I have been here a lonnng time.
5 stars from me sir. ;->