All Comments on 'Caged - Introduction'

This story is an outline sketch I get that. It has great potential but is, to me, confusing maybe a little more background context would help. Don't be put of please write some more

The gender reveals are a bit shocking, but also confusing at times. Rewrite, retitle and keep it going.

Nice story! I would like to see a little pain on Hayley, from this boots, or some ballslapping, etc.

Keep going!

I would not say that you literally stole. The same rule was in another story about futanari that came out earlier and which the author cannot continue in any way, or does not want to. "TEASING ILSE" if you're interested (Maybe more people push him to write a sequel). And this was in an even more old hentai manga. I would rather say that this is a common trope for the locked futanari genre. We just don't have enough stories like this.

As for the story.At first, it seemed to me that it would be a surprise that Charlotte also caught Mia in a cage)) But your scenario is also curious. Medusa 55 is right about the context. The reader should be given some time to get used to the characters and remember them. I moved my eyes several times over the text to remember which of them was masturbating and which opened the door.

Love your story. Looking forward to more. I like that some people are using the futa idea without the need to make the ALL ridiculously hung. You should also introduce the inevitable shrinkage that comes with long term chastity.

More please, I'm begging you!

Why has your other story been taken down? Are you still struggling to get the new chapters published? I really enjoy your writing and am still hoping for more

+1 to the previous comment i check every week for updates :(

Hey all, thank you for the continued support and kind words! Looks like it may be a while before I can get Homeomorphism published here in its entirety, but I will continue to try. In the meantime, it has been posted elsewhere under my current username, The Deviant Circus. I've got some other stories in the mix that I'm trying to get posted here as well, hopefully I'll see you all again very soon!

Definitely love the proof of concept. You should absolutely keep this going. Some things that would be good to know going forward, is Mia just a girl or does she have a cock too? How long had Hayley been locked? Exactly how small is her "cock"? Given her reaction in my head I'm thinking sub 5". Hope you continue this