All Comments on 'Caleb 22 - Josh and Louise'

This one maes you worry, unless it dawns on you about something, then is is just good plot twisting.

Anyone reading the past few chapters could realize this wasn't real...but this was a fucking jarring illusion. The gang-rape was disturbing enough but Josh and Louise's 'fetish' for it happening to them (along with the compulsion fetish) is so far beyond my comfort zone that I couldn't finish reading it.

You need a disclaimer at the beginning of this one to warn people what they are getting into.

Not for me.

to anonymous - Now why didnt I think of writing a disclaimer at the beginning of the chapter - Oh wait, I did, you asshole.

Thank you for the chapter! It's actually one of my favorites when you know what is is.

It being illusion was obvious, but even so it was just gratuitous tripe that turned good characters into tropes. Unfortunate.