by antony4127
Haha what a stupid premise. Entertaining though. She was made it to be too incredibly stupid.
Great story , was well written . Would be great to continue further with the nurse series.
You wrote a good story but you need to do a little more research. A size 12 woman with 5' 2" height is anything but slim and would not be considered perfect.
..but still fun enough until you decided to stray into the "non-consent" zone and turned her from the victim of her own cocktease into the kind of idiot who'd leave the scene without destroying the evidence first.
Her old man should find out what a whore his little nurse wife is and hunt down Karl and kill him in front of her and then slowly cut her into little pieces. Start with a finger, just slice it off. I can here the slut screaming. Just wait until he cuts her nipples off with the wire cutters! Death to the cheating cunt!
And then her husband found out, divorced her and beat the shit out of them both........then she needed a nurse of her own and the help of a charity. "antony" the name of a traitor and a fag.
An OK story let down by some poor punctuation. Keep at it, I look forward to seeing more.