All Comments on 'California Dreamin' Pt. 03'

The introduction of Quinn to the story wasn't unexpected. The genre of the story indicated that a transgendered/crossdressing character had to be introduced into the story eventually. You did a very good job. You expressed Jack's emotions exactly as I would have if "caught" with Quinn by Sloane. I look forward to the next chapter. Thanks for sharing your talents and imaginative writing.

I think another chapter of finalizing the relationship is needed. It's just not finished yet. It's kinda left me hanging

Generally not a fan of trans story, but you handle it so well from the accepted to the sex scene. Hopefully a threesome in their future? Regardless, well done!

@coyote62 - you're absolutely right! Stay tuned for chapter 4.

@youjizz123 - thank you, it means a lot when I can get someone to read something they normally won't. Your patience and perseverance will be rewarded!

@curricd - appreciate the kind words. True emotions are the bones of any story, and I'm glad they resonated with you.

Love this story! Keep it up.

Great story - really phenomenal character development that charges the sex up more. Awesome stuff, keep it going.

Fuck I just love this! So hot when Quinn untucked, and so sweet when Jack sucked her off. This is everything.