All Comments on 'Call Me If You're Going to be Late'

by Voboy

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EvelynEdenEvelynEdenover 4 years ago
Clever!

Fantastic little idea and so well written!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Missed...

Here I thought he was going to realize he had made a video call as he said good bye...

yowseryowserover 4 years ago

Oh lovely!

So many stories in so few words. Sweet enchanting visceral descriptions, enhanced with Borgesian mirrors.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyabout 4 years ago

One thing missing, Jeff was in the wife while they talked.

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All but a few of my stories are linked together; they all take place in a common "universe" that, frankly, I'd love to live in. So any character in any story is, eventually, fair game to have themselves a wild time with any other character. I've gotten a list together that co...