All Comments on 'Camp Lost-in-the-Weeds'

more of this story please.

Written okay but a lot of incest readers don't want to read husband/wife sex or random unrelated lesbian sex. More taboo, less mainstream please. Also, tag this as lesbian and mother so readers can decide if this is what they are looking for. There wasn't even any F/D penetration. 3/5

Like usual, the writer takes something that could have been enjoyable and turns it into garbage because you lack the ability to form a good story without the inconceivable, unbelievable and implausible in life. Lacks clearly a lack of talent and too many hours spent behind a computer screen masterbatering. That's pathetic.

Good story. A few little nit picks that weren't too distracting. ('libations' was probably not the word you wanted), Looking for more stuff in this topic category from you.

Please continue this story.

part 2 please! it's perfect like that, don't change it

Could have been so much better. Bringing the mother in was lame, and she was too willing at that.

The literal climax of the story is the mother and daughter, not the father and daughter. Which is not in keeping with the rest of the story.

Also, you switch to present tense about halfway through the story, when the father is talking to the mother.

This was pretty good it is happening slowly and I definitely enjoyed it looking forward to more