All Comments on 'Camping Can Lead to Sex'

by LMFranklin18

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
It's interesting

I'd be willing to read more. Want to see where it goes.

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxover 12 years ago
I agree with previous commenter

As a large woman as well you dont see us in many stories of this type and I like how this is going....

keep it up...literally :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Exceptional piece

I've been reading here for more than a decade, and this is the first time I've felt like commenting.

Very, very well done. Your heroine already feels like a much more real person than the vast majority of characters one finds here, and it serves to make the story feel much more like a 'this happened to me' story than just another pornographic story.

LokiwolfLokiwolfover 12 years ago

great starter cant wait for more :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wonderful!

This was just wonderful! I really enjoyed the detail that was put into it, the character type, everything! I can honestly say that I cannot wait for what comes next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Cannot Wait

This is such a well written beginning. I hope you continue this very soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

I love this story. I have never commented on stories before, but hope you will keep going with this one. I've been checking back in since September so, please keep writing! I'm hooked.

PinkYarnPinkYarnover 11 years ago
Cant wait.

More Please.

ixi974ixi974over 11 years ago

Please keep writing i'm beyond hooked

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

i love this please keep writing its so good

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
love it!!!

you did an amazing job with this...please pick it back up

wdbtchrwdbtchrover 8 years ago
Interesting!

This is not a category I usually get into and this is the first story of this type I've read. I think I'll check out more and if there are any additions to this one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
FINALLY !!!!!

i WAS THRILLED TO DEATH TO FIND THIS ANIMAL LYING WITH AN APPRECIATIVE HUMAN. BRAVO. PLEASE WRITE MORE. IT'S SAD THAT IN SOME ANIMAL HUMAN STORIES, THE ANIMAL USUALLY IS MORE HUMAN WITH A SLIGHT ANIMAL QUALITY OR APPEARANCE. I JUST LOVED HOW ANIMAL HE WAS. THANK YOU SO MUCH, I WILL KEEP LOOKING. XO

belle1belle1over 6 years ago
Sexy!!!

This is so good I could feel every thrust and it felt good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More?

It's a great story but it needs more

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I hate abrupt endings

Grrrrrrr

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
More please

So sexy. I want more.

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