All Comments on 'Camping Exposure Ch. 15'

The total story is a 5+ star story. I don't rate individual chapters unless they are above and beyond, maybe 10 stars.

I don't know anything about the drugs that were being used, but I do know hypnosis works. I have been under at least 3 times. Two times were entertainment type for people watching me and others do suggestions. Once was more of a serious type, going into a past life. I could see it clearly and felt it clearly.

The ending seemed quite fast for how long it took building up the story. Still gave it 5 stars. Can't wait for your next series.

Wow... that was a WILD romp. Thank you, m_Storyman_x!!

What a wonderful wrap up chapter to this Hot Erotic Drama. So glad Debbie thought to follow Allen when the coed lured him to the basement. Thankfully Ivy is bisexual or Xenia wouldn’t have been involved to help change the programs in all these victims. The Epilogue did a great job of explaining and tying up loose ends. Allen and Sue now have a new “normal” sex life. Thank you M for your wonderful erotic imagination. On to other older stories that you have written.

Wonderful series, almost sorry for the end !!!

Overall, the story was ok. It was good at first, but as more and more stuff about Adam she Dr Kim came up, it started to feel like filler, like you didn't know where you wanted to go with it. You spun out all the random sex, but then ducked it when it came to the actual incest part. It felt like a weak ending, once it got there.

A cuck until the end...

Phew! That was a marathon... :)

“I’ve got you under my thumb,” says Adam, “now for my revenge… you will sit in this comfy chair with nothing but a cup of tea… and some cookies!”

Truly, it was entertaining, but the “punishment” worked out remarkably well for MC who suffered not at all.

Also would have loved a circle back to Abbie and the original girls from the camping week.

But, you kept me in all the way to the end. 4.75 ⭐️