All Comments on 'Camping Surprise'

Personal opinion, the story can be hot, but a lot of it happens without much detail. This could be the draft to a much larger story.

Personally I'd love a bit more description of the characters, their attitudes and their feelings when doing all of this. For example, if they liked it or not, or if they felt guilty about liking it, etc.

I liked it. But seems like the ‘guest’ was just used. He didn’t enjoy an orgasm. Someone should have at least sucked him off.

Love it.

Could have used more detail. Did guest cum from prostate stimulation? ETC. Plus could have been longer for sure. But of what you wrote was OK.