All Comments on 'Camping Trip'

Excellent, makes my dick hard

Beautiful vignette, nicely told. A welcome introduction to your body of work. 5*****

Just good. More but then again a good place to end too.

I must be missing something here. This story reminded me of a script for a porno from the 70's and yet it is sporting at the time of this note a 4.67 rating!

Oh, my, I should have gone camping more when I was young ...

Well-written fun bit of erotica!

Sweet! Women are amazing loving creatures, unlike many a douchebag guy.

Don’t normally read lesbian sex stories but this was real good. Would have liked a bit more description of intimate areas but there was nothing, I’m a detail man see ,……. I’ll be reading more of your work that’s for sure

Wonderful short story. It seemed both found something neither was looking for. I love going camping and unfortunately I can relate with Randy. 5 stars

The first instance in the tent was too fast forwarded, Needed much more time spending on the very first skin to skin interactions, imho.