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Click herePris's face winced up as she started to wake. The hangover headache was hitting her first, and the sun pouring in through the window was making it hard to open her eyes. Soon though, the same kind of realization began to dawn on her as well. Amanda looked at her with a mixture of love and dread of what was to come. Neither could bring themselves to speak, to say the first words that would shatter this spell and turn this beautiful dream into a difficult reality.
In that moment, there was a short sharp knock on the bedroom door. "Hey, Amanda..." Lisa opened the door as she spoke. "Have you seen Pris anywhere?"
- COMMENTS
NightStarDreamsover 2 years agoI was surprised they both were but very nice. Definitely look forward to more.
James999isover 2 years agoGreat story you have so much more to write and so many directions you can go keep it UP
Anonymousover 2 years agoWhat a great start to a story and to a first post. You picked a solid topic and put your own spin on it which works very well. I await your next chapter.
Anonymousover 2 years agoA few synical comments.
It is cynical, please check me on this to see that I am not picking on you, but trying to better your essay.
Another very strange one is Pris' appendage. In many cases an 's' at the end of a word may become possessive with an apostrophe against the 's' .
I must admit that the sun making it hard was not what I had hoped. My wish was that each might havery morning wood, follow their instincts from their previous night, and the be caught or joined by Lisa.
Oh well.
Your take is more than good AND I believe you can bring this a long way further. For example, there is a double bed available and all three would be attending at the same campus?
Lisa just might feel closer to both girls than already revealed.
So much potential with the ground work you have so wonderfully set out.
Please read aloud to highlight the slight blips and/or locate an editor to ramp up the textual quality; your story quality is great!
