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I don't know where she hid the red lipstick but I went to work with it around my cock.
- COMMENTS
Einzelkampfer4 months agoA good story focuses on a couple, possibly three or four characters, but this one felt like Tolstoy at times, and everything was always in motion. It needs a 10K-15K word edit to unclutter it, speed up the pacing and make it readable.
Rzcanuck10 months agoI really did not like this. As others expressed I got a little ways into it and knowing the author's proclivity I stopped and went to the end which met my expectations based on his other stories. So sad for a good writer to do this.
Anonymousabout 1 year agoStopped reading this either page 3 or 4, don't remember. Nor care. 10 pages, the last being 1 line, Too drawn out, so expressing to page 9, I found that she got pregnant. Or I think so. Some was hard to follow. Dorothy, playing with this guy's penis, just to rile her husband up? Then she gets angry when he leaves?
---> 1st, she shouldn't be doing that at all, & the guy's wife is a dunce for agreeing with it. 2nd, for an intelligent woman, she's a few nuts & bolts short in her brains by listening to this female empowering councellor & her ideas. Including the tattoo, which wound up being temporary.
----> Then there's the shit of "it's my body...". OK, yes, it's your body. But in marrying, you can't dictate access to your spouse not say you can do anything & throw that up several times. You disrespect me like that, after the humiliation with her so-called friends, the response is "then I can do whatever I want. Here's your divorce, because your actions of late & words tell me you've already cheated on me. So now I've freed both of us to be with whomever we want."
---> I didn't read of some of the things written about by the commenters below as that's likely part of my skipping. Again, too long, too drawn out, that I sometimes lost track of what character I'm reading about. 2 stars Bob
Anonymousover 1 year agoI believe the whole last 4 or 5 chapters were all wrong. First off we found out that the baby wasn't his, and instead of all this Fantasy play, she turned him in to a chastity caged cuckold. Because that is how the first half of this story was Written. So it just doesn't make sence..
Anonymousover 1 year agoLong story. Her reaction to the fertility test and not talking to her husband but sticking with a man-hatijg counselor was odd. After page 4, skip to page 9, realizing she got pregnant along the way. This story was bloated. Some of the early stuff with Sarah the counselor was ok.
