All Comments on 'Canada Days: La Belle Belle-Soeur'

by JackStrange

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JohnLaw1950JohnLaw1950almost 4 years ago

She took her panties off and placed them in your hand. Then when you got to the apartment, you said you put your finger under her panties, trying to find her clit. When did she put her panties back on? Then when she lay down on the landing and spread her legs, you dove in and started eating her. Once again, I assume she didn't have any panties on. Pay attention to continuity.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Interesting combination of motives and conditions with a little fate thrown in.

This is good stuff. I want more. I noticed the panties booboo but decided to ignore it as the story had my attention. Bipolar disorder plus an unstable girl who might be for real makes compelling reading. Add in the offbeat ambiance of French Canada and you have something special.

R.

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