by BigMadStork
That was a fun Romp! Sex, Love, and even a bit of tear generation - my favorite kind of story! Thank you...
I do not give a shit what any one else says, this is a great story. I loved every word you put down. Keep up the super work. Hope you post more soon, Please.
this is a great fun story, you want believable go talk to a politican . thanks for an enjoyable tale if they dont like it refer to title thanks again
It took me awhile to finally read this series but I'm certainly glad I did. You really have a crazy imagination and talent for writing.
A really exciting and sexy story. Who cares if it is “out there”, it is a dream we all have. We can still dream, can’t we?
I have read many of the author's series.
I will not judge the grammar. I don't know English well myself and I read the stories with the help of an online translator. ;)
The author has his own style and thoughtful plot of stories. But at the stage of implementation you get mistakes. The story is not written gradually developing. It's like a Lego constructor. You write individual scenes, episodes, dialogues. Then they are combined more or less in the order of the development of the plot. And then there is the finished story. But it's like a child putting together a Lego set. Everything looks right, like the picture on the box. But here the car has no wheel, the house has an extra window, the oak tree has a pine branch.
It's annoying. I want to erase and rewrite everything.
The big plus ( or minus ) is that all the stories are over and have an epilogue.
Loved the ending, I am glad to see that in this story had Jack, Candy and Janice living happily ever after as a polygamous family. Well done 5+++++stars
Absolutely sucking fucking wonderful. I have been fucking my drains out with my two live in fuck buddies and their two best friends and the best friends 18 year old daughters for weeks now reading this series. Cunt crazed fucker.