All Comments on 'Candy's Fashion House Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

come on no man can be that stupid she is playing him for a fool she f**ks around on him and he still puts up with her shit now she is trying to bribe him with a new bike just so she can get him to go out dressed as a woman shake your head she is going to get him a man then she will have her lesbian friends and have him do men real dumb bastard get out while you can

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Lucky guy

Would love to have her as a girlfriend... making me pretty and feminine so we could go out together looking for guys or girls

prodigalspoonprodigalspoonalmost 5 years ago
Like it so far

Hi, I'm enjoying your story so far and find myself looking for the next chapter every day.

I have to say that as the chapters go on, I'm liking Lauren less and less.

One minute she seems loving and wanting good things for Mikey but then she shouts derogatory terms at him.

Hoping to see a more understanding Lauren in the forthcoming chapters.

Great storytelling so far though!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Lauren is psychotic. And this is getting repetitive. He’s playing around but she wants him to go WAY farther. She’s clearly cheating and doesn’t see him s a man in their relationship. When he wakes up after being drugged and shared with one of her obvious lovers he’s really the idiot for staying.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

hope he doesn't find (figure) it out too late that she is giving him hormones

when is he going to follow her after work to get the proof of her "club" of feminizing their men and mike is the current bet to become one

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
its enjoyable but

its pretty much just a rip off of a boiled frog

liz33ndliz33ndalmost 5 years ago
i like it still, and hope this continues

i speculate she is just hanging with her lady friends, and as previously mentioned, she is turning him into a lady boi girlfriend.

LisaBrooksLisaBrooksalmost 5 years ago
Curious

Awhile back I noted she was giving Michael supplements and getting his meals to become less fatty and greasy! My first thought was she was giving him Estradiol to become more feminine! When Michael mentioned his butt was adding on the pounds wait til he gets boobs! They become firm and grow pretty good like a teen going thru puberty (Tanner Scale)! Will he become shocked without knowing what he's been taking? You bet! I do believe like Lauren seeing her husband struggling with the male/female battle of wills! Eventually, with the help of Lauren, he will step out as that sexy woman she sees him as! I think her best female friend Karla will have to have a key to the door and walk in on them to help push the buttons with lots of encouragement! 3 girls out night Friday! My speculation of what needs to be done! No more red faces!

Tanky1000Tanky1000over 3 years ago
Holy Shit

I really wanted to give this a chance, but wow. I think you know what you are doing, you are writing a textbook, extremely toxic relationship with emotional and verbal abuse and guilting turned up to the nines and even a big gift.

I thought that the big twist would be that the victim would leave like he had earlier, but as this story goes on it’s clear that he’ll simply develop stronger forms of Stockholm syndrome until Lauren gets what she wants.

I have to wonder if it’s meant as a joke that Lauren is so obvious about the fact that she’s cheating on him with a girl? Shits so fucked up I feel so bad for Michael.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Disturbing

Wow! What a seriosly screwed up relationship! Lauren is a total nut job and should be in a mental Institution! I dont find this intertaining at all and cannot read anymore

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
The big cock

So who has she been fucking all this time?

oldmandremeroldmandremeralmost 2 years ago

well I tried to read this but he is such a wimp and she's a cheat

OnlyInMyMindOnlyInMyMind10 months ago

This is disturbing reading. Lauren is obviously mentally ill and Mike should be disappearing over the horizon. There is no affection in this relationship so, whatever happens next, it's just too far beyond belief to be credible.

B3ndoverB3ndover6 months ago

What’s wrong with this fekin guy. He’s going to please her anyway just stop faking you like it

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