All Comments on 'Caper in the Crater'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Don't write in second person.

It is annoying. Please use first or third.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyabout 5 years ago
Have to agree

I never know if I am meant to associate with the you or the I. Makes for frustrated reading.

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