All Comments on 'Captive Ch. 06'

enjoying it a lot.

I was however amused to find that you turned Lord Elrik into dinner.

dinner is what you eat the person eating a a diner. same error three times in the last few paragraphs.

Sorry about the typos found in this section. i didn't mean to make anyone dinner.

very well written yet again and im not sure how to express my feelings about the story otherwise.