All Comments on 'Captivity Sets Her Free Pt. 04'

I absolutely love this story and hope there's more to come!

I like the dynamic of the complimentary desires of the characters, but I do think more work needs to be done on describing their physical features. I kept changing the pictures of the characters in my head as I read it. Better descriptions would help with continuity. But other than that there's a feeling of reality in the story, like this could really be happening somewhere, because how could we know it's not?