All Comments on 'Captured Kitten Ch. 02'

PLEASE don't let her get broken, please don't let him win, please let her put him in his place!!!!! This type of stories are only enjoyable if you know the bad guy gets his comeuppance in the end and truly learns the lesson that doing things to a woman without her consent is not the right way to get a woman to love him, either by getting genuinely remorseful and crawling on his knees literally and figuratively, or, if he can't get redeemed, then he needs to be jailed for good or castrated or even killed in her self-defense

Sounds like the author of the previous comment needs to write their own story, instead of trying to direct this one.

Great so far.. Looking forward to more..

To the commenters who have liked this story:

Thankyou so much for your support! You might not know but it took alot of courage to post this story and your encouragment has meant the world to me. This is one I've been working on for a while. Its been sitting in my docs slowly gathering chapters. its honestly 25 000 words long now. So I can promise you alot more to come. I'll be posting an update every week minumum. If you notice any typos, logical inconsistencies please point them out. But more importantly please let me know the things you like about it. At this stage in my creative process I could use that. Thank you for reading and if anyone wants to help me with editing please let me know. I'm a terrible editor XP

To the commenter who seems to be in wrong section of literotica:

Don't worry about Kate being broken I don't write broken women. But as to the ending having to be revenge situation I can't promise that. This is erotica, I don't go deeply into the backstories of the characters because I want to focus on the heat. So don't think to deeply on the morals, I know I don't. I just write what seems hot to me. and hope that others will find it hot too.

The important thing to remember is that this is nonconsent story. And some of us prefer our male leads to be dark villians. If you prefer this section for its reluctance stories than you may be reading the wrong thing here. I placed a warning at the top for this very reason. Good luck in your quest for the right porn. It can be difficult finding exactly what you need. Just remeber we all like different things

Loved it. I disagree with the commenter begging for her not to be broken. I actually enjoy stories when the victim is nearly completely broken and the antagonist has to crawl and beg for forgiveness. I love when alpha doms like Mal fall hard for their victim but realize they may have ruined things forever. Please keep up the angst!

Very interesting cannot wait for more

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Yesss love this story . I do have a fear of suffocation so when the panties were shoved in her mouth with the gag , I didn’t enjoy much lol. I guess I picture that happening to me and see myself choking and dying. Other than that I really like it so far .

I Like the Tenderness . . .

. . .after all, he already has her completely under his control; he doesn’t need to call her nasty names or humiliate her. It’s going to be difficult adjusting to her new situation without making it any harder than it has to be.

When can we expect the next chapter ? Was reallllyyy hoping you could release a new chapter every night . This story is great

I’m 100% with Anon of “PLEASE…” she stuck with a fucking monster. I hope it ends in a positive manner.

That said, I’m not requesting that you alter your story. You should write whatever you want to, plenty of people will like it. Yes it’s clearly a fantasy but unfortunately I prefer my fantasies with realism so yes I do look at logic and morals in a story. Still at least you’ve confirmed that this is definitely not for me. As for “dark villains” well by default most Dom’s have a dark side it’s required for the mind-fuck aspect of BDSM.

Best of luck with your writing.

Tess (UK)