All Comments on 'Captured Kitten Ch. 05'

I hope she keeps up not being willing to ask for an organ no matter what else he does. The non-con is super hot. But I hope she finds a way to dial 911 on his phone without getting caught. Please don't make her fall in love with this. I usually love forced love stories, but she is so strong.

Thank you for the chapter!🥰🥰😍😍😍🥰💙♥️💙🖤❤🖤❤🖤 I adore this book so much! 🖤❤🖤❤🖤❤😍😍😍

I know she will finally give in and accept the inevitable and if kept long enough maybe not want to leave if given the choice but I love the realism of her fighting back as hard as she can first. He is wearing her down in a way so far that has been pretty patient for a sadistic psychopath.

Yes, a new chapter!! Best ever book and the author!!💛😍💛😍💛😍💛😍💛😍💛😍💛😍💛😍💛😍💛😍💛😍💛😍💛😍💛😍💛😍💛😍💛😍🧡😍🧡😍🧡😍🧡😍🧡😍🧡😍🧡😍🧡😍🧡😍🧡😍🧡😍🧡😍🧡😍🧡😍🧡😍🧡😍🧡

Very nice

Really good! I look forward to the rest of their story.

Thank youuuuuuuuuuu!!! Pleaseeeee updateeeeeee soonnnnnnn!! Love ittttttttt!!

I miss them😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😭😭😭😭😭😭😍😍😍😍😍😭😭😭😭😍😍😍😍😍😭😭😭😭😭😍😍😍

Please a new chapter soon. 😍 🥰 love, love, love, love it!! 🥰 😍Would be great to see where she tries to escape. And then she is found and broght home. And then he explains to her that it is her home and that he is her future and life.

Please update soon!🥰🥰🥰🥰

It’s extremely challenging to build up a story line in a serial erotica that makes the reader crave more, while also leaving them annoyingly aroused. I likely won’t return to your thread for quite some time, because waiting for a chapter at a time is exasperating to say the least. Some may describe it as cruel torture.

It sounds as though you’ve got far more done than you have posted. My advice as another literotica-published author is to utilize the site’s offer of free editing, find an editor who is a good match and let them rip your story to shreds and piece it back together again. Then finish her off (pun intended) and post it at a more rapid pace, gathering input from readers as you go along. When you’ve finally come up with a solid piece self publish on Amazon under a pen name and make a few bucks a read off your talent.

Because I read through quite a bit of crappy smut there this evening before coming here hoping to find something to scratch that itch (bad pun also intended) and now I am just more frustrated overall!

We need more!!😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

Hey all sorry it's taken so long between chapters. I struggle with chronic fatigue syndrome so I'm not able to write as often as I'd like to. But I just posted a new chapter and I am determined to finish this book and hopefully publish it. Thank you all for your patience and support!

Take you time.. 🥰🥰 But hope you can update soon. All the best for you. 🥰🥰

😣 the moderator rejected my latest submission so I guess I'm in need of an editor. I'll try to get the next chapter out for next weekend though. If anyone is interested in editing for me then let me know

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Love it.

Thank you for this series! Looking forward to the next update!!

The best book!!😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

I'm dying I love this so much