All Comments on 'Captured Pirate Princess Pt. 01'

by Charliethelost

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VividVictoriaVividVictoriaover 5 years ago

What a story! Beautifully paced without too much set up, and the descriptions of the way her body builds towards orgasm we’re just perfect. Can’t wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
belongs in the BDSM category

this should be in the BDSM category, it is too hard to believe that she would be so into being beaten...

CharliethelostCharliethelostover 5 years agoAuthor
Response to anonymous

Thank you for your feedback.

That is the beauty of fiction and fantasy, things that are hard to believe can, and often do, take place.

In regards to the beating, while it may be hard to believe she enjoys it, it would be equally, if not more so difficult to believe that being captured by pirates would not result in some form of corporal punisment.

Charlie

cpark1170cpark1170over 2 years ago

The word panties is a contemporary word. I'm not sure how realistic you want it to be but that word takes the reader out of the historical setting.

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