by V.Rich
I loved this whole series, BUT THIS WAS THE SEXIEST INSTALLMENT.. Who will be your next victim???
this was a great story, but I would have liked to see how they reacted in the office at a later date. What would his thirty employees think of his new appearance with his shave face and hair cut. Is it too late for sequel??????
Superb writing with the female in charge, which is quite unique. Tia was brilliant with her plan, and I loved every second she was in control. Hope she will take on another male in a similar manner, because this chapter was exceptional!
I'd definitely like a follow-up to see their interaction at the office...and what did she write on that note?!
Finish the story. My granddad always told me if you start something do it and do it right. (He was in WW1 as a sergeant in charge of a machine gun bunker). Did she get pregnant? Did he figure it out? Only you know how it ends, so tell us.