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by wajawhiii

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pepepilotpepepilotover 1 year ago

I wasn't overly impressed with the story until the last couple of paragraphs. I loved the ending, but I hope you realize this begs for a part 2. 4-stars from me, 3 for the story, 5 for the finish, averaging out to 4.

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