All Comments on 'Career Day, Ch. 01'

Hope there's more chapters to this story...Great start ! Hugs and Kisses Betty jo xoxo

This was a good introduction. I would like to see more so 5 stars.

you need to learn when it's appropriate to use comma, constantly misplaced they ruin the flow of the narrative

Mmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmm such a sweet sexy story!!! I hope there will be more!!! I wish I could have been that lucky!!

Thanks for the comments! Yes, there will be more forthcoming. And, Anonymous, We'll have to disagree on where commas go.

Relieved that there was a greater opportunity than them taking advantage of their applicants.

Interesting, to say the least.

Hey Erica,

found you through your comment on my story and I'm so glad I checked your profile that lead me to this hot tale.

I love the story how it's starting, can't wait to read the next chapters.

Also, I like your style. Keep going!

Thanks, Nathalia! There are I think, 5 chapters , but that might be the one that they wouldn't publish the ending, because it was short. I didn't feel like adding filler, just to meet the word limit.