All Comments on 'Caribbean Adventure Pt. 03'

I'm sure actual Navy Seals must be totally disgusted at the way they're used by wimpy authors dreaming of being a badass.

posting anonymously on a porn story site really says you're nails though doesn't it

Let's sum up...

Wife is doped and pimped by low-lifes. Husband is forced to watch and eventually sent to die, while wife is blissfully slutting it up with others. He saves her while he could have left her, but he is supposed to simply forget it even happened, and immediately. Just turn those memories off, NOW.

Fucking unbelievable, emotionless, inconsiderate, feminist shit.

Sorry, it was nice to see a real man act to save "others", but the rest is trash

Sorry, I found it to be too much. I was skimming at the end.

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Much a fantasy interesting.