by emmaxin
Love it! This nicely wrapped up the loose ends of the two families uniting and the HEA makes sense - 5 stars! Thanks so much for sharing your writing talent with us!!!
As far as what I'd be interested in reading next - I would personally love to read something heavier on the non con side from you. With your writing voice - especially on the inner monologues - I think it would make for some super hot non con! Just my thoughts :)
Regardless of what you decide to write next, I know I'll definitely be excited to read your work!
Good story, I hope you continue to make historical stories, but i was just wondering about the time period. I asume it's set sometime in the 1700's after the installation of the Bourbon monarchy for Spain and before the fall of the French Bourbon monarchy in the 1790's but it would be nice for some clarification on the exact time period. Also how would the unity of the island work, since the 2 families are representatives of each other's empires Spain and France, I don't think France would just give away it's half of the island to Spain.
Well done! Whilst I wasn't feeling every aspect of the story (e.g., the way Rafael initially humiliated Catherine) I stuck through it and did find satisfaction in where the story ended. I agree with previous commenter that some more heavy noncon (sans humiliation) would be a good way to go considering the compelling/humourous prose you write for the character points of view.
Moar noncon. Way more noncon. Way darker. This was great but far too tame. Historical dark noncon. Yummy
Lol! I'm joining in with the dark and heavy noncon crowd for your next story!
A very fine story. I just binged the lot. Great stuff, and i am such a sucker for a happy ending.