All Comments on 'Carl Learns Piano (Or Not)'

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Vintage_DMVintage_DMabout 1 year ago

good story ... thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Five stars despite the occasional spelling error that innerups the flow.

LimeyracerLimeyracerabout 1 year ago

Normal people finding each other - luckily - and described very well.

lotmorethanfun76lotmorethanfun76about 1 year ago

Beautifully written. Loved the storyline too. Reminded me of my college professor. He was 15 years older than me and our relationship was very mature and lastewd well into my married life.

RodThrustinRodThrustinabout 1 year ago

Great. You should try to limit the adverbs: those words ending in -ly-, Near the beginning one paragraph had four of them.

For a story this length, four or five total is plenty. But the narrative and content were A+

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Wonderful ! Makes older folks realize that life goes on and you should never give up hope of finding someone that is right for you !

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