by Ynotnow69
Beautifully written. Loved the storyline too. Reminded me of my college professor. He was 15 years older than me and our relationship was very mature and lastewd well into my married life.
Great. You should try to limit the adverbs: those words ending in -ly-, Near the beginning one paragraph had four of them.
For a story this length, four or five total is plenty. But the narrative and content were A+
Wonderful ! Makes older folks realize that life goes on and you should never give up hope of finding someone that is right for you !