All Comments on 'Carmine's Millions'

A very average story. Sorry. AA+++

Are you kidding me? Walter cums in his mouth after degrading him for months and he fist bumps him on the way out? Carmine is stupid enough to let this treacherous bitch blindfold him for any reason?? I guess he probably enjoyed swallowing Walt's jizz.

Lol. The typical incel fetish.

LW story, and not a very good one. Cuck shit.

2 and I wasn't even sure about that rating. Allows his wife's behavior to go on for a long time while just accepting it, knows she is cheating but doesn't do anything except gather more evidence despite having plenty, allows himself to be tied up by a woman who admitted she wants to take his money and very well could have wanted it all, and fist bumps a man that is sleeping with his wife, trying to rob him, and fucked his wife on top of him. Was okay to a certain point but once he agreed to be tied up things went off the rails.

As one story said, “ You may be beautiful on the outside, but you are ugly on the inside!

5 stars.

Walter should have lost his

A total waste of.my time. Poorly conceived and written. One star.

How was this a BTB? Why are Walter and the able to move and eat solid food?

Yeah, OK, he just chuckles and waves off the sexual assault? He has it on film, he could have sent them to prison.

Idiotic reaction to being raped

No reason to give the money away. Had prove of her fucking around before and during marriage. Proof of illegal restraint, imprisonment and rape.

Pull the story and put it into something intelligent.

What a pathetic load of fucking rubbish

Poor writing

I thought the overall story was good. The rape thing was a little over the top. With that left in, the wife and boyfriend should serve time. No alimony, no waiting, and could get his company back.

This story was ridiculousy. She fucks up at the wedding and on their honeymoon. Annulment, not divorce. No kids, not married that long; she gets no assets. They both leave with what they had. He got raped. They didn't go to jail? Carmine and Walter fistbump after the rape? Pure crap! Carmine isn't angry? Bullshit!

AND THERE WAS NO REASON IN THIS STORY WHY WALTER HAD TO BE BLACK. ANOTHER LW TROPE TO FUEL WHITE FEAR.

Quit writing lazy, or quit writing.

Rrriiiight..don't know what you tried to achieve with this nonsense...because you ended up with unrealistic rubbish.I do not like to discourage writers,but i sure do discourage you from inserting unbelievable crap like you did in this one and ruin a likely decent tale. The worst one was giving away 10 MILL so they could not get it????not believable. fist bump a jerk that ejaculated in his mouth while his cuffed to a chair,wow,wow,wow batman that is sooo believable..enough so that you ruined the dam story...2 stars as its an insault to the readers

Just another load of unbelievable fucking bullshit

Just ignore the morons with their Moronic opinions who didn't like your story. It was very good. With a twist and on top of that had a happy ending. These jerks that don't even write, act like they are so well educated and know everything. Just delete them out! It takes a lot of work to write a story, hours and hours. You probably put in 40hrs on this. It was a fun read. Thanks for the Effort. 5 stars from me. Thanks, Buster2U

Lame.