All Comments on 'Carnival'

by Viper139

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Great start! More please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Your English is fine and the story is wonderful

SubkrwSubkrwabout 1 month ago

I enjoyed your story. I cannot wait to learn more about these characters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Great job. Loved it. Please continue.

rentturtlerentturtleabout 1 month ago

This is hot. Keep them coming!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Fun story … please continue … seems driving trucks around. Cologne is getting much more fun ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Great story. Please keep it going

shorterversionshorterversion13 days ago

Really liked this. Please write more. Super hot

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