All Comments on 'Carol'

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PattythebellePattythebelleover 16 years ago
Great start

Keep this thread going because you have me intrigued as to how they will get him. I get the impression that Daddy is someone that is either in the company or can get information out of the company. Looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Where was the action?

There should have been at least some action in the first part.

Maybe we could have sat in on one of carol & Daddy's fuck sessions or something.

Not bad.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Down with JC

I hate blackmail stories, they are always made up of cocky jerks that think they know it all. I hope JC gets caught. Carol never did anything to him, like most people he's too stupid to know when to mind his own business. I the tables are turned on JC.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
dull

Not impressed. No action. Probably could have read this in a newspaper.

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