Carol Cum Coral - A Metamorphosis Ch. 02

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Like most women, I prefer fore-play before down and dirty sex. That's what I'd like to think I'm doing; a lot of build-up before actual penetration. I imagine that's why so many female authors on Literotica deny their female protagonist's orgasms until the pressure builds up, and they're screaming for release and relief. I find that extremely sensual and a serious turn on. If you're into instant gratification, go elsewhere. There's nothing here for you.

Fourthly: Before you bash my writing style, grammar, spelling, or punctuation, please, at least have a Master's degree in English and have written a best-selling book, e.g, the Great American Novel. Don't clobber another's works if you can't write perfect, unblemished stories yourself. Bashing is not honest criticism.

And above all: Don't hide under anonymity. Don't be a creep. Own up to your opinions. Identify yourself before you criticize. If you're not registered with Literotica, please do so. If not, add your name, rank, and serial number to your feedback. Well, at least your name and some self-description, especially if you're male or female. If I don't know who you are, I can't take you seriously.

I cannot suffer trolls. I see their nasty vitriol in other writer's feedback and wonder why they're allowed to walk this earth. Get thee gone loathsome, onerous grinch. You are not welcome here.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

this is mindfuck. Situations, constellations, reflection over the meaning of sex. It reminds me of pornographic works written by French philosophers. I read two stories now and it is all still in the foreplay, in the build up.

Quite different from how most stories here on Literotica work.

I discovered your collection of stories when I was on a search for erotica written by women. Bored by the olympic spirit of many male authors (bigger, faster, higher), curious if there differences to find, if female authors will tell things in another way, if there's something to learn in them for me about women, about female sexuality.

I'm a man, a more than mature man, but not a real man. I've been at odds with my body and gender since I can remember. I feel attracted to women, but not as a conquerer.

Thanks for writing, thanks for sharing your mind, thanks for the bio you wrote. I appreciate that your pieces are different.

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