All Comments on 'Carol's Introduction to Sex'

a good story slow but nice. Will she try the younger brother and his friend with the gaming or the couch?

Loved it gave it four stars. I didnt give five because i can feel you could write even better, more detailed, let us know more about her looks, create more tension, tell us how she feels (same for the guys). However i like that it is realistic. You hint at a second part with her daydreaming to give herself to losers to abuse which is a fucking cool setting that also reminds me a lot of the second part of adriana love, one of the best NC series. Very good Story!

Thanks for your comments. I'm always open to ideas. There will be a second chapter; the nerds will get their way with her. I'm finishing another story and then will get to work on it.

hoover

Didn't find this character all that compelling... And, I'll suggest Hoover, that you are a better writer using the abusive male voice... Your emotions from the abused female perspective read too much like a dude wishing it!! Just my thoughts old friend!!