by MrFidelio
Wow. Fantastic writing. I was disappointed when it ended. Is there another chapter to this or is he
leaving us like Grant, wanting and eager.
Pretty hot story....well written ...... good gramar, spelling and sentence structure.
The sex and build up was great—beautifully written, but the ending was too abrupt for me.
I especially loved the mentions of Daisy toward the end and the internal monologues.