All Comments on 'Catching Feelings Ch. 05'

OMG, how much of a fool do you have to be to attack the person with evidence against you that could bring about your downfall. Jasper is not only vindictive, cowardly and a bully, but also stupid. This chapter had so many powerful emotion stirring moments in it. The back story on Jeremy's relationship with Jasper and the aftermath with his father was particularly moving. Well, if there ever was a case of "What doesn't kill you, will make you stronger", the situations in this chapter prove it. This also showed how much power love can have in the healing process. With Jimmy by his side, it looks like Jeremy will be just fine. And speaking of Jimmy, he's definitely not your typical dumb jock. With his reasoning and good sense, he actually sounds like he'd make a good therapist himself. #5 gets *****s plus for its highly emotional ride, can't wait to see what #6 brings. MLF

Thank you for another brilliant chapter.

Your writing has the ability to draw this reader in to the extent that I feel I am there with the protagonists. It makes for a very emotional and involving read and is life enhancing in a very real sense.

Superb!

Hell yeah for therapy! A whole lot to unpack and absorb here. One thing is certain: Jimmy is one impressive character.

I was/am so a part of the story that when Jeremy talked about taking all the pills, a cloud enveloped me and I started to tear up feeling his pain. That’s because you are such a phenomenal /fantastic story teller. I’m in aw of your talent!

This was such a great revealing and long chapter. I enjoyed all the background information about Jeremy, his family (esp. his brother), the confessions from Jasper. the suicidal ideation and how Jimmy is so patient and wise. The therapy sessions were well done and doing a couples therapy session was even better. I do lack understanding Jeremy and Jimmies questions about their relationship. It’s happened a couple of times now, this last time at the end of the chapter caught me off guard. It wasn’t obvious to me that Jeremy had no intimacy with Jimmy for six weeks after the emergency surgery incident. I was having a hard time grasping it as he resumed soccer practice and soccer games. Hopefully they can have more therapy sessions and work on their insecurities too. Certainly seems like they’re deeply in love and excited to to have found each other.

Loving it so far! I hope we get a Chloe/Wayne side shoot eventually, even if it’s just one chapter

You will indeed get a short Chloe/Wayne offshoot! I'm in the process of editing it now. We've finished up that short story already, and eventually we'll delve in Ethan's story!