by ingarlm
...a very good start!! I enjoyed it so far, and looking forward to the following chapters. Only one little comment, mainly about the first few paragraphs; it is like you are listing the decriptions whereas you could take a little more time to describe them instead. It doesnt quite fit with the rest of the story (hmm, hard to explain) The flow of the rest of it is fabulous, it was only that first bit. Anyway, very good!
I admit i read fast the first descriptive part and savoured the rest. I cant wait to read more of it!!!
I love this new story. You have started with a bang, cant wait to read ALL of it. Keep writing i love ur stories.
I usually skim read most stories, and get straight to the kinky contents. But, I found myself really enjoying getting to know the characters of your story. I almost felt, I was right there amongst them, watching it all unfold before me. can't wait to read the rest ^_^
fantastic!!!
I loved this story the first time I read it, and now I know why. Its amazing. I wish you would write some more.
It needs sex between Sam and Tilly... Then Fin and Dill have a little action Tom.
I've totally drunk the koolaid and will be ignoring all my obligations to read through this. (It's interesting to read other comments-some one wants Sam/Tilly action? Did they not READ the story' sheesh!)