All Comments on 'Cat's In The Cradle'
by WifeWatchman
- 14 Comments
Regnzabout 4 years agoAbsolutely loved the origin story of the Original Crowbar and knowing what it has gone on to represent
Anonymousabout 4 years agoIncredible....the the minds of my two favorite story tellers, Harry Chapin and WifeWatchman melding together..Storytelling get no better than these two!
WifeWatchmanabout 4 years agoAuthorThe next (and final) chapter of this story is submitted, and hopefully will be published soon.
razarocinanteabout 4 years agoI dont't know, if I interpret to much into the interactions between don and laura. Or better the lack of them. He doesn't turn to laura, after the emotional moments (death of ms grizz and the reveal of the name). No sex no nothing.
Feels like a big blow up is comming and a real possible, that they divorce.
This is very well written. Just cought up at the worst timing for a cliffhanger like that ;)
Anonymousabout 4 years agoThere was a line in the last stoey that Don and alaura came to a truce regarding dealing with Carole that would last 16 years, so I suspect there's no divorce on the horizon for them.
Back to this story, I'm guessing either Leann or his mother is the person approaching Don.
WifeWatchmanabout 4 years agoAuthorThe truce over Carole will last for ten (10) years, not 16. And no, no divorce or anything like that is imminent. I'm unable to detail every time Don and Laura have sex (and every time Don, Laura, and Paulina have threesomes when they are at The Cabin overnight).
666icemanabout 4 years agoIf I get this right my mind tells me that Laura and Martin Nash's Uncle are the ones who kidnapped the IC and took him below the hospital, so if your loving wife did that to you to try and get some old boys secret papers would you turn to her for support when Griz's wife passed away and why he is determined to ensure he has a say in his daughters upbringing. That is one reason that Cindy is having trouble with, as her loyalty to the IC is above her loyalty to anyone else. The IC stopped her from telling him as he knows but don't know and if anyone told him it was Laura then he as she stated herself her life would be worse than a living hell. Since that day when he was put under the hospital his time and love for Laura has dropped to almost zero. So Malina and Laura are made from the same tree and have shown him the same type of respect and that is none. This is a five star start to what looks like a good tale about good old Apple Grove, almost like where I grew up. 5* Iceman
Anonymousabout 4 years agoThe Iron Crowbar has found some of Westboro's gold if that heavy tile is any indication. Loved the origin story and the use of Harry's wonderful song. Please keep the stories coming.
An Undertaker.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoInteresting read so far...
The naming of the lake after Troy,was a shock
I didn't c that coming...
Stories surrounding Apple Grove are always fascinating...
My heckles are up on this one
Keep them coming
...Godian...
pitbull_1973about 4 years ago“And now you know...the rest of the story”.
Nice little subtle nod here to Paul Harvey
Ravey19about 2 years agoLoved the story of the blue crowbar. Something bad happening in Apple Grove again or are they looking for the Materials still.
More I'm reading the more I'm getting concerned for Don and Laura's relationship / marriage. We've never been given any reason for Melina's behaviour during marriage to Don, and I feel,Laura may be doing the same. Still suspect she was in on his second torture session as only her would know all the details of his life and twist them into his dream state. The other I suspect is a Nash, but not sure which.
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