by shawnavinyltv
So damn good! 5 stars easy! Very well done, and if you write more than I for one am guaranteed to read it!
Great writing and understanding of kink. Love that you include hard limits and the story flowed smoothly and was incredibly hot.
Excellent story. I loved it as did my wife. She can fully relate. She is asking whens the next story coming out? Love the curiousity at the end and room for more.
A great story,my only quibble is,they both seem to be novices but them Stacey is an experienced domme.
I have to agree with the previous poster that Stacy is awfully good at this, way too good really, considering there is no indication that Stacy has ever had a dominant thought in her life before this interaction, or that, even if she has had a thought, there is no indication that she has done any research of any kind. I suppose one could argue that she is just a natural but, really, even a natural being this good her first time????? On the other hand, it would probably be no fun to write, or read, a story about what a first time BDSM encounter, with no one having any fore-knowledge would really be like would be like, so I understand. Still, it would have helped, tremendously, to have included even a few sentences to the effect that, ever since she had seen that movie and that catsuit, her thoughts had been drawn to BDSM and specifically femdom, and that she had been doing a lot of reading and was developing a lot of ideas about how she might like to dominate somebody. Having said that, it is really just a quibble on an otherwise excellent story which is well worth five stars. In closing, I just want to say that I wish I had run into a Stacy in high school and I'm looking very forward to chapter 2.
The big thing I will say is that remember Stacy was reading Venus is Furs and other femdom-ish literature, so she's been doing research. Also, she's being coached by Kate, which we'll see more of as the story progresses. Sadly, I'm a very slow writer, so it will take a while.
Yowzer, yowzer, yowzer!! Why didn't I meet a girl like that when I was a teenager?